Question

【题目】【2016江苏镇江】书面表达

假如你是阳光中学校报英语专栏的小记者，上周日参加了学校为迎接世界环境日绢织的远足活动，请你给校报写一篇报道。

活动情况	活动地点	北海公园
	参与人员	七年级全体师生
	活动内容	上午：环保(environmental protection)演讲比赛 下午：自由活动(唱歌、游戏、放风筝……)
┃活动评价

要求：

1．所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥。

2．文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计人总词数。

3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。

4．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。

Last Sunday was a sunny day．Our school organized a hiking to greet World

Environment Day． ____________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Last Sunday. was a sunny day. Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day. All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the activity in Beihai Park.

In the morning, we had a speech competition on environmental protection. The speakers talked a lot about protecting environment, like saving water, reducing air pollution. In the afternoon, we did what we like. We sang and played games together. Some of us enjoyed flying kites. Some volunteered to pick up rubbish in the park.

It's a meaningful and exciting day. We've realized it's our duty to help protect the environment. We had a lot of fun the whole day. I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是表格文字提示性作文。要求根据表格提供的信息写一篇报道。文章所写内容是学校为迎接世界环境日组织的远足活动，可以从活动地点、参与人员、活动内容、活动评价等方面入手，来叙述远足活动的情况。注意：1．围绕表格中的提示要点，加以适当的发挥。为使行文流畅，可适当运用一些关联词语和使用适当的句式；2．本作文是记叙文体，讲述的是上周的事情，故全文使用一般过去时态表达；在陈述信息时，应该使用第一人称。

写作亮点：这篇短文要点全面，内容丰富，语言准确，时态运用正确合理。短文通过三个段落非常条理的记叙了远足活动：首先介绍人物及地点，然后通过In the morning, In the afternoon,引出活动，之后对活动进行评价。从短文的句式多变中可以看出作者英语功底非常好，如：We've realized it's our duty to help protect the environment.，I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school.等等。