Question

【题目】【2016广西来宾】书面表达

根据以下提示，请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文。从良好的生活习惯、适当的体育锻炼以及健康的饮食习惯等方面，为“how to keep healthy”提出良好的建议。

要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 不得使用真实的地名、校名和姓名等；

3. 词数：80左右。文章的开头与结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。

部分参考词汇：熬夜stay up；垃圾食品junk food；均衡饮食keep a balanced diet；按时饮食have meals regularly

How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy……

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_______________________. In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays, more and more people know the importance of keeping healthy. Here are three main ways to keep healthy.

Firstly, it is necessary to keep a balanced diet. We aren’t supposed to eat too much junk food. It is better for us to have more fruit and vegetables every day. What’s more, we are supposed to have meals regularly. Secondly, we shouldn’t stay up too late. Getting enough sleep is also necessary. Finally, it is important to take regular exercise, such as swimming, jogging and so on.

In a word, we should develop a good habit of keeping healthy. In this way, we can enjoy a happy life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何保持健康。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： it is necessary to...，We aren’t supposed to...，t is better for us to ...，we shouldn’t ...，it is important to ...，we should ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用所提示的词组，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了保持健康很重要，接下来介绍图和保持健康：均衡饮食，不要熬夜，定期锻炼，最后指出总结我们应养成一个好习惯。此处keep a balanced diet,be supposed to,what’s more,stay up, such as, in a word等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。