Question

【题目】（题文）书面表达

课外活动可以让我们增长知识，发展智力，开阔视野和塑造性格。许多学校创造性地开展了课外活动，如朗诵、唱歌、讲故事、演话剧、办刊物以及举办各种体育活动等。

最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参 加课外活动。

1.你校开展课外活动的情况；

2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；

3.为同学选择课外活动或为学校开设课外活动提出建议。

注意：1.词数 80 以上；

2.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名；

3.稿件的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools.

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Answer 1

【答案】After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us; Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.

Dear friends, please actively take part in after-activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.

【解析】

这篇作文要求写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参 加课外活动。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意如果主语是第三人称单数的时候，谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。