Question

【题目】某英语杂志征稿，要求根据下列提示信息写一篇80词左右的梳游肯而的文童。文童的标颢及开头已给出，不计入总词数。

大多数人都喜欢旅游，因为旅游是一种很好的户外活动。你可以欣赏自然美景、呼吸新鲜空气、广交朋友，重要的是你可以忘记疲劳，保持身体健康。当然了，还有可能发生其他的事。你也可以写写你所遇到的有趣的事情。

Traveling

Most of the people like traveling because it is a very good outdoor activity．We may enjoy the

Answer 1

【答案】Traveling

Most of the people like traveling because it is a very good outdoor activity．We may enjoy the nature when We go out for traveling，and we may enjoy the fresh air outside．Besides，we can make many friends．The important thing is that we can forget that we are tired and forget the unhappy things．Traveling is good for our health．

However，sometimes，we may run into troubles when going traveling．For example，we can’t change the weather．It may be rainy when we are traveling．So we should prepare things well before the trip．And I hope everyone could enjoy himself／herself during the travel.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍旅游的好处。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：because it is……，we can……，It may be……，So we should……，And I hope……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.