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【题目】【山东省德州市二O一五年初中学业水平考试英语试题】书面表达（共1题，计20分）

新学期开始，某学校的学生社团又开始拓荒了。假设你是社团负责人，请根据以下内容和要求写一篇80－100词的英语宣传员，为新同学介绍下列社团的情况（包括名称、活动内容及其目的）。

Good Players English Lovers

watch matches speak to foreigners

do one h ‘s sports every day talk about good ways to learn English

keep fit improve your English

Excellent Cooks

design healthy

learn to cook

have a healthy life

要求：

1. 自拟第四个社团，包括名称、活动内容及其目的，不少于2句；

2.语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；

4. 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Welcome to Our Clubs

Boys and girls,

Welcome to our school. Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you. _______

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These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.

Answer 1

【答案】

Welcome to our Clubs

Welcome to our school. Now let me introduce some of our clubs to you.

Cool Players is a good choice for sports lovers. Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body and watch sports matches. If you are interested in English, English Lovers is a good choice. In the club, you can speak to foreigners and talk about good ways to learn English. I hope you can make friends with other English lovers. Do you want to be a good cook? In Excellent Cooks, you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dishes, which can lead to a healthy life. If you are interested in books, Smart Readers is a good choice. Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes.

These are the most popular clubs in our school and I hope you can join us.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以学校社团负责人的身份，在新学期开始的时候，为新同学们介绍一下各个社团的情况，题目中给出了我们三个社团Cool Player, English lover和Excellent cooks，还给出了这几个社团的一些基本情况，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。另外我们还需要自己补充第四个社团的名称和它的活动内容以及目的，这就需要我们自己发挥想象力来完成这一部分的内容。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应主要使用一般现在时态，第二人称you来叙述。写作时，要注意表达合乎英语的规范，注意语句之间的连接，尽量使用一些好的词汇、句型和短语，增强文章的表现力，使文章意思更加连贯，表达更加流畅。

写作亮点：这是一篇优秀的范文。短文中作者按照题目的要求给我们介绍了学校的三个社团的活动内容，又发挥想象力补充了第四个社团Smart Readers,内容完整，要点全面，语句通顺，符合题目要求。短文中作者使用了正确的时态和人称，句式表达符合英语的规范。作者还使用了一些较好的句型和句式，如if引导的条件状语从句，If you are interested in English、If you are interested in books等；还用到了一些较好的短语，如a good choice for sports lovers、Here you can do sports one hour a day to build your body、talk about good ways to learn English、you will learn how to design healthy menus and cook dishes、Reading good books and writing reading notes are useful to improve your knowledge and open up your eyes等。这些句型的使用从整体上提高了作文的档次，显示了作者较高的写作能力。