Question

【题目】短文写作。（共15分）

今天是6月21日，父亲节。假设你是李明, 你早起为爸爸做早餐，煮了一碗鸡蛋面条。现在请你按照下表提示内容，用英语写一则日记。

煮面条的过程	水，面条，鸡蛋，佐料 ……(3—4个步骤)
爸爸吃面条后的感受	美味，高兴，夸奖 ……
你的想法和打算	自豪，感恩，祝福，多帮助父母分担家务 ……

要求：

1．请使用恰当的关联词叙述做面条的过程。

2．可以适当增加内容，但是文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。

3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。

4. 词数80左右。日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Sunday, June 21 Sunny

Today is Father’s Day. I got up early and

Answer 1

【答案】

Sunday, June 21 Sunny

Today is Father’s Day. I got up early and I cooked breakfast for my father. First, I boiled some water in the pot and cooked eggs and noodles in it for a few minutes. Then I cut up some vegetables and meat, put them in another pot of hot soup. Finally, I put the noodles in the big bowl, added eggs, meat, vegetables and some salt. My father had the noodles happily. He said it was delicious. I felt proud and happy, too. From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. I hope my parents are in good health forever. （94 words）

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇日记格式的作文。在父亲节那天李明为父亲做早饭。文中介绍了做早饭的过程；爸爸吃饭后的感受及作者的想法都描述的较清楚。我们要做的就是用适当的句式，合适的连词，用英语把它们表达出来。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色。如： My father had the noodles happily；He said it was delicious;I will help my parents do more housework. 表示顺序的词：First， Then，等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩。