Question

【题目】书面表达

同学们，计算机在我们的学习和生活中起着非常重要的作用，它是二十世纪一项非常伟大的发明。那么，你对计算机的起源和发展了解多少呢？请根据下表写一篇英语短文，介绍一下计算机的发展变化，并简单介绍一下计算机的用处。

要求：

1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；

2. 不少于80词。

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Answer 1

【答案】Computers play a very important role in our daily life. Do you know the history and changes of computers?The first computer was invented in 1946. At that time, it was very huge and as big as a house.

As the computer develops, it is now a very good helper in our daily life. Through it, we can store information and send messages to other people. We can also listen to music on computers and play computer games to relax ourselves.

It is difficult to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers. In my opinion, computers have changed our life completely.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in our daily life，at that time，as big as，listen to music on computers，in my opinion，other people等。而As the computer develops, it is now a very good helper in our daily life./ Through it, we can store information and send messages to other people./It is difficult to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。