Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫李涛-你和父母就“学牛周末该不该与同学外出活动”进行了讨论。请以Should teenagers go out with friends at weekends?为主题，参照表中所提供的信息，给你的网友Sam写一封邮件，介绍讨论情况。

Your parents' ideas	Your ideas
1读书、做作业	1和同学外出活动
2好好上床休息一下	2外出活动也是一种调节和放松
3考试分数最重要	3……
4帮助父母做家务活	4……

要求：1所写内容要包括表内信息：

2表中Yourideas中的3、4两个观点由你对应做出合理的说明，还可适当发挥你父母和你的其他观点。

3词数为110词左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sam,

How is everything going with you? I have had a discussion with my parents recently. We talked about if teenagers should go out with friends at the weekends.

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What's your idea about the problem?

I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Tao

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sam,

How is eveL~hing going with you? I have had a discussion with my parents recently. We talked about if teenagers should go out with friends at the weekends.

My parents think we teenagers should read more books and spend enough time doing our

homework. They think marks in the exams are the most important for us. When we feel tired, we should have a better sleep in bed. So they don't want us to play out with friends. They also think if we have free time, we should help them do the housework at home.

But I think we teenagers should go out with our friends at the weekends. It can make us feel relaxed and give us more energy for our study. We can also learn a lot from our activities. Of course, if we have more spare time, we should help parents do the housework.

What's your idea about the problem?

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如read more books，spend enough time，the most important for us，have a better sleep，have free time，help them do the housework，at the weekends等。而My parents think we teenagers should read more books and spend enough time doing our homework./ When we feel tired, we should have a better sleep in bed./ It can make us feel relaxed and give us more energy for our study.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。