Question

【题目】小作文。

每个人都不可能没有烦恼。当你有烦恼时, 请试着控制你的情绪, 因为情绪可以影响你生活中的很多方面。所以生活中我们应当相信自己, 笑对（smile at life）人生, 多与父母、朋友沟通。

请展开你丰富的联想，写一篇短文，谈一谈怎样面对伤心，烦恼。 要求：句子通顺，表达清晰，词数在80之间。参考词：normal, all right, talk to, listen to ,take part in, with the help ,feel

Answer 1

【答案】Nobody can be happy all the time. When you become unhappy, you can try to control your feelings. Because bad feelings can make you lose your friends and give you other bad effects. Here are some ways to make you feel better.

(1)Look in the mirror and speak to yourself, “I’m the best in the world. I can do anything.”

(2)Do something for others. You will feel happy if you always help others in need.

(3)Smile when you get up in the morning and believe you will have a nice day.

(4)Write down your thoughts, dreams or anything you want. Writing always helps you express your feelings.

(5)Stay with your family. You may talk with your parents, relatives, friends and so on.

【解析】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如all the time，try to control your feelings，bad effects，make you feel better，in the world，help others in need，get up in the morning，write down，stay with，talk with，and so on等。而When you become unhappy, you can try to control your feelings./ You will feel happy if you always help others in need./ Smile when you get up in the morning and believe you will have a nice day.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。