Question

【题目】【天津市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（本大题共15分）

假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下：

（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。

（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。

（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。

（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。

（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……

参考词汇：跳广场舞 do square dancing （对某人）有意见 have a complaint (against sb.)

要求：

（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Boys and girls,

I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.

A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’s more, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.

In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言的发言稿。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： she is...，some neighbors have a complaint against ...，They think that...以及But they should ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意完整地表达提纲中所列内容。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了发言稿的主题，要介绍自己的祖母，接下来介绍祖母现在和过去的比较，以及邻居们对广场舞的态度，最后阐述自己对人们跳广场舞的观点。此处be in love with, have a complaint against, a good way to do sth, keep healthy等这些词组的运用以及 状语从句so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.的运用也让文章增色不少。