Question

【题目】假如你是初三学生李华，在初三紧张的学习生活中，你感受到了父母对你浓浓的爱。请根据以下要点提示，向你的美国朋友Tom写一封信。　　

1．成绩并不优异，但父母一直鼓励你；

2．父母在其他方面对你的关爱（自拟两点）；

3．表达对父母的感激之情；

4．请对方回信，谈谈自己的父母。

具体要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；

2．词数：100个词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3．语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；

4．文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其他信息，否则，不予评分。

Dear Tom,

How's it going? This time I'd like to talk about my parents. I don't realize how much they love me until I am under pressure．

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How’s it going? This time I’d like to talk about my parents. I don’t realize how much they love me until I am under pressure.

I am not good at study, but my parents always encourage me to be confident and keep trying. Every day they come home, they go out of their way to make delicious food for me. They look after me as well as they can. Also, they pay much attention to my feelings. Whenever they find me upset, they will communicate with me patiently. Now I have made a decision to study harder and understand my parents better. Only in this way can I show my thanks to my parents.

Please write soon and tell me about your parents.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】解析：这是一篇提纲作文。内容是给美国朋友Tom写一封信说说你感受到的父母的爱以及感激之情，注意信件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、三人称。
写作思路：首先需要审清主题，围绕主题展开作文；其次可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）成绩并不优异，但父母一直鼓励你；
2）父母在其他方面对你的关爱（自拟两点）；
3）表达对父母的感激之情；
4）请对方回信，谈谈自己的父母．
重点短语和句型：encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人去做某事，go out of one's way to do sth不辞辛苦做某事，pay attention to注意等等