Question

【题目】【山东省青岛市2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（共15分）

现在，很多中学生被近视困扰，请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：1. 造成近视的原因；

2. 近视对学习或生活的影响；

3. 你认为应该如何保护视力？（至少两条建议）

要求：1. 字数80-100字。开头已给出，不计入总字数。

2. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。

参考词汇： eyesight n. 视力 nearsighted adj. 近视的

have good eyesight 视力好 have bad eyesight 视力差

Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now

Answer 1

【答案】

Quite a lot of students have become nearsighted now. I think the main reason is that students don’t have a good habit while studying. Bad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study. For example, if we leave our glasses at home, we can’t take notes in class. We will feed uncomfortable when we swim with glasses. Here is my advice: on the one hand, teenagers shouldn’t study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax. On the other hand, having sports and doing eye exercise are also helpful.

It’s very important to have good eyesight. So let’s take good care of our eyes.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲作文，要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确写作要点：近视的原因、对生活学习的影响、如何保护视力。短文要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思，要包括提纲的全部内容。根据本题要求，可知本题主要用一般现在时态，用第一称形式。

写作亮点：本文按照提纲提示进行写作，内容完整，包含了提纲所提示的全部信息。本范文恰当地运用了复合句进行表达：比如：I think the main reason is that students don’t have a good habit while studying.（用了宾语从句、表语从句）；if we leave our glasses at home, we can’t take notes in class.（用了条件状语从句）；teenagers shouldn’t study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax.（用了原因状语从句）等等。文中的一些结构也运用得当，使短文更加生动具体：比如：on the one hand, on the other hand; It’s very important to have good eyesight. So let’s take good care of our eyes.等等。