Question

同学们，你房间的物品是如何摆放的呢？请描写你的房间，不少于60个单词。

Answer 1

My bedroom

I have a lovely bedroom. There is a bed in my bedroom. There is a desk near my bed. There is a pink doll on my bed. I sleep with it every night. There is a big window in my bedroom. The yellow lamp is on my desk .Every evening, I do my homework under the lamp. I have a big shelf in my bedroom. There are many books on the shelf. I like reading very much. Do you like reading? You can borrow the books from me if you like?

My bedroom is so nice. I like it.

【解析】

这篇短文要求我们描述自己的房间。我们在写作时要注意：1.要保持主谓一致。2.要避免句式的单一。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣题目要求，描述了自己的房间。2.文章句式不单一，在描述房间里有什么时，用了两种形式，There is a big window in my bedroom. The yellow lamp is on my desk .在介绍房间的时候穿插了自己的生活，使文章不单一，The yellow lamp is on my desk .Every evening, I do my homework under the lamp.