Question

你在学校学习了很多科目，列举出来，并谈一谈：你最喜欢的学科是什么？你认为什么学科最有趣；什么学科最枯燥（dull）；什么学科最难；什么学科最重要和最有用。
要求：1. 围绕此话题，适当展开。结构完整，语言流畅，语法准确。
2. 字数在80 ~100之间。
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Answer 1

We study many subjects at school, such as Chinese, maths, English, physics, biology and so on. Of all these subjects, I like English best, because it is very interesting and I can learn more about foreign countries. Besides, I can make more friends. I also think English is the most useful. We can use English to communicate with people from other countries. We can read English newspapers, too. I think physics is difficult and boring. I don’t like to study it but I have to. For our students, it is necessary to learn all the subjects well. So we must study hard at every subject. In this way, we can get good grades.

试题分析：这篇作文让我们围绕着在学校里所学的这些科目，来发表一下自己的看法。首先我们要先介绍一下我们在学校里都学哪些科目。这其中你最喜欢的，你觉得最枯燥的，最难得，最重要的等，要有层次的，分别来说明，不要出现逻辑上的混乱，表达要有秩序，不能重复。这是一篇开放式的作文，这个话题，每个人都自己不同的看法，所以可以随意发挥。注意使用正确的英语表达方法，符合英语表达习惯，并且语句连贯，文章流畅。
【亮点说明】这篇范文还是比较优秀的。首先它包含了题目中规定的所有要点，并对这些科目分门别类的发表了自己的看法，意思连贯。文章中也注意使用了一些短语和句型，如Of all these subjects, I like English best, because it is very interesting、Besides, I can make more friends、For our students, it is necessary to learn all the subjects well等。这篇短文的不足之处是文章中所涉及的科目偏少，对这些科目的看法比较集中。