Question

18．海南自改革开放以来发展非常迅速．各方面发生了翻天覆地的变化，人们的生活水平也有了很大的提高．具体表现在以下几个方面：
in the past：roads，narrow； houses，small，dark； living conditions，hard；communications，simple，slow
nowadays：wide，buildings，tall，bright； comfortable； quick，easy．
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含所给内容，并做适当拓展；
3．词数70左右．（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Hainan has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up．Great changes have taken place here．In the past．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more ring roads have appeared and buildings are becoming taller and brighter越来越多的环形路出现，房子也变得更高更明亮．
比较级+and+比较级  越来越…
【高分句型二】
Thanks to the government，Hainan is becoming better and better．多亏了政府，海南变得越来越好了．
thanks to …多亏…

解答 Hainan has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up．Great changes have taken place here．In the past，the roads were narrow，the houses were small and dark．The living conditions in the city were hard．The communications are simple and low．（过去）
Now  it has developed rapidly．More and more ring roads have appeared and buildings are becoming taller and brighter．【高分句型一】people's living conditiongs have improved a lot．It‘s more comfortable．The communications are quick and easy．（现在）
Thanks to the government，Hainan is becoming better and better．【高分句型二】

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点