Question

某调查组到社会上进行调查环境污染的问题，设计了下列调查表.。
请你根据上面的调查表说说作为学生如何做好学校环境保护方面的工作。

kinds of pollution	There are many kinds of pollution around us such as _air   pollution, _water_      __ pollution, __noise/white__  pollution and rubbish pollution.
results	The environment on the _earth_ is becoming worse and _worse_ .

注意：短文要求正确、流畅；词数80个左右。（本小题15分）
提示词：keep…clean and tidy,   clean(v.),   sweep,   throw rubbish into the dustbins,
plant,  so that,  protect,  speak highly of(高度赞扬), 
make a contribution to doing(为……贡献)
(不得出现真实的学校名称和姓名。)
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version:
Our school is our second home. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. Everyone can do something useful to improve the environment. First of all, I think it is necessary for us to clean the school yard every day. We must clean the windows and the doors. We also need to sweep the floor. Make sure everyone knows to throw rubbish into the dustbins. Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course, a lot of trees and grass should be planted in our school so that our school looks greener. In a word, if every student makes a contribution to protecting the environment, our school will be much more beautiful.

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍有那些污染，污染造成的后果，以及在学校如何变化环境。注意提建议的语言的应用。
【亮点说明】这篇短文句式丰富而且使用了大量的的短语。如It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. First of all，also，Those who do well in protecting the environment should be spoken highly of. Of course，In a word等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。