Question

假设下面是你的一位美国笔友所在学校的基本情况，请把表格中的信息用完整的句子表达出来，写一篇不少于60词的短文向你的同学们介绍美国中学生的校园生活。

Time	9:00 am—4:00 pm
Midday	Have lunch at school; Chat and listen to pop music
After-school activities	Have a lot of time to do
Class	Twenty-five students in each class; Don’t have to wear uniforms
School	A library, a big football field and a swimming pool.
Homework	Half an hour of homework

 

Answer 1

One possible version:
My American friend’s school starts at 9:00 a.m. and finished at 4:00 p.m. They have lunch at school. After lunch, they chat with each other. Sometimes they listen to pop music. They have a lot of time to do after-school activities. There are twenty-five students in each class. They don’t have to wear uniforms. There is a library in their school. They often go there to read or borrow books. They also have a big football field and a swimming pool. They don’t have much homework. They only have to spend half an hour on homework every day.

解析这是以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。