Question

请你以David的身份给Mary写一封信, 介绍你自己和你家人的情况。你可以谈谈他们的工作和他们所喜欢的食品。信的开头和末尾已经给出。你需要用下面的提示词: family, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, chicken, vegetables。要求60-70词。

Dear Mary,

I’m David. I’m from England. _____________________________

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Yours,

David

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Mary,

I’m David. I’m from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They’re my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father is an English teacher. He likes fish very much. My mother is a doctor. She likes cooking. Chicken is her favorite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat vegetables. They are good for us. Look! We have a happy family.

Yours,

David

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求根据所给中文提示语，在60-70词之内介绍自己的家庭成员的工作和他们所喜欢的食品。 用一般现在时，主语是I/he/she/they，正确运用be动词，like之类的词表达。

【亮点说明】本文要点齐全、行文连贯。介绍了一家四口人（爸爸、妈妈、姐姐和我）的职业和所喜欢的食物。第三人称单数做主语时谓语动词用单三形式，是学生的难点易错点，需要多多练习。be动词的形式也因为主语的改变而变化等。此外，like doing，the same，be good for也是本文的写作亮度。

考点：提纲作文。