Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你的笔友Peter想了解你日常生活中的榜样。请你以“A Role Model in My Daily Life.”为主题，给他写一封邮件，告诉他你日常生活中的榜样是谁，做了哪些令你敬佩的事情，并谈谈你的体会与感受。
提示词语：role model, set, example, help, learn, hope…

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

My role model in my daily life is my teacher, Mr. Green. He is very friendly to us and he has a good sense of humor. He is patient with all the students in class and tries to make his class interesting. We never feel bored. He teaches us how to think by ourselves and helps us solve the problems at school. We look on him as our “close friend”. Mr. Green sets a good example for me in my life. He is such a great teacher and I'm proud of being his student. I hope to be a teacher like him when I grow up.

【解析】这是一篇提纲式作文。要求考生按照题目的要求，写一篇连贯的回信。短文要包含提示所有信息，要做到语句通顺、意思连贯，主旨健康，中心突出。此外，考生在进行写作的时候，要注意写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，是文章的内容更生动。