Question

请根据提示写一篇题为The Population Problem的短文。

提示:         1.人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；

2.中国是世界上人口最多的国家；

3.如果人口增长过快，将会带来许多严重问题：空间，工作，交通等方面。

4.我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。

要求：1.词数为90个左右；  

        2.所有要点提示必须用完，不得逐字翻译；

        3.字迹工整，卷面整洁。

The Population Problem

                                                                              

                                                                              

                                                                               

                                                                             

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

The Population Problem

The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. It’s difficult for many people to find jobs. we are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.

I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类短文，所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，可有适当发挥。根据材料可知，本篇短文要把目前人口太多这一问题，以及我们中国人口的情况表达出来。通过分析可知，本文主要用一般现在时。写作中适当使用连词、从句等，使上下文意连贯，表达富有条理，更有逻辑性。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量句式和短语，例如，not only…but also、be short of 、be known as、for example等。还有一些句型的使用，也为文章增色不少，例如，It’s difficult for many people to find jobs 、we should do something to control the population 、It has worked well in controlling China’s population.等。总而言之，这篇短文表达很流畅，层次很分明。我们平时的学习中要注意积累和总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，或背诵一些较好的句子，写作时可适当引用，使文章表达流畅，富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。