Question

【题目】书面表达

随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题写一篇90词左右的短文。

现象
弊端	影响与家人、朋友的关系（relationship）；容易引发交通事故；对身心健康有害，不利于学习和工作。
观点	正确利用手机；面对面交流胜过网上聊天……

要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：1. have effects on 对……有影响 2. concentrate on 聚焦于……

3. face-to-face conversation 4. make good use of

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them. It has effects on the relationship between them. Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving. It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents. Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping. It’s bad for their health and their study. In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone. Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life. But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers。

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求按图表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”为题作文。短文重点是两个方面，一是现象与弊端：揭示现代人用手机的恶习及其产生的危害；二是观点与方式：告诉人们怎样正确的使用手机，利用好这个现代的通讯工具。短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。

写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，说明了人们使用手机给生活带来的危害，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。文中用了while doing， instead of, rather than等等结构，给短文增色不少。