Question

【题目】每个学生对于自己未来的工作可能都会有不同的观点和想法。请你根据以下内容要求，以“English Teacher—My Future Job”为题写一篇短文。

要求：

1.“我”喜欢英语，梦想当一名英语老师；

2. “我”要教好“我”的学生，在课堂上多用英语讲课；

3. “我”还会通过在课下讲英语故事、举办英语夏令 营等活动让学生对英语感兴趣。

注意：

1.可以适当发挥想象，以保证内容丰富和流畅；

2. 词数不少于80;

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

English Teacher—My Future Job

Everyone will have a job in the future.__________________________

I will study hard and make my dream come true.

Answer 1

【答案】English Teacher—My Future Job

Everyone will have a job in the future. I want to be an English teacher, because I like English very much. I’ll teach my students as well as possible. I’ll give my lessons in English as much as I can. I’ll try my best to make my lessons lively and interesting. I’ll also try to tell my students stories in English after class, or help them play a part in English summer camp, so that they’ll be interested in English and improve their listening and speaking. I believe that I can become a good English teacher.

I will study hard and make my dream come true.

【解析】试题分析：本次作文为记叙文。用英文写一篇以自己未来工作梦想为主题的习作。要求：1．以“English Teacher—My Future Job”为题；2．可以适当发挥想象，以保证内容丰富和流畅；3．词数80字左右。（开头已给出，不计入词数）。要注意时态运用，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。

【写作亮点】：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如want to be ，try my best to make my lessons lively and interesting.，make my dream come true.等，特别是运用了一些复合句，使文章表达更为清晰清楚，思维更为严密，例如，I want to be an English teacher, because I like English very much.，…so that they’ll be interested in English and improve their listening and speaking. ，I believe that I can become a good English teacher.等。 总之，该文是一篇优秀的习作。