Question

【题目】当今社会，无论在大街小巷.餐馆，还是聚会场所，你都能看见一些人正低着头玩手机。网络上给他们取了一个有趣的名字叫“低头族”。作为中学生，对此现象，你有什么看法？请写一篇80--100词的文章。
写作要求：1）书写工整，语句通顺；
2）文章中请勿使用真实姓名或地名；
3）自拟作文标题。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：
How to use mobile phones properly

With the development of society and science, mobile phones are widely used in our daily life. We can see a number of mobile phone fans almost everywhere. As a middle school student, how should we use mobile phones properly?

We shouldn't spend too much time playing with our dear mobile phones. First, playing with phones is harmful to our eyes. Second, we have so much school-work to do. Third, we'd better talk to each other face to face instead of chatting on the phone. What's worse, if we pay much more attention to our phones, dangerous things may happen to us.

In a word, the mobile phone plays an important part in our life, but we ought to use it correctly. Then we can have a better life.

【解析】这是一篇命题作文，以“How to use mobile phones properly”为题，用一般现在时态，第一人称进行表达。短文共分三段，第一句用一个短语With the development of society and science指出人们使用智能机的社会原因；第二句指出一种社会现象：mobile phones are widely used in our daily life。第三句话锋一转，how should we use mobile phones properly?揭示本文主题：How to use mobile phones properly？第二段是全文的重点，讲述过度使用手机的危害。然后由first, second, what's more引出几个方面的理由。要点明晰，条理分明。作者使用了spend some time doing sth, 动名词作主语，不定式作定语，if引出的条件状语从句等等。具体生动。短文最后一段号召人们正确使用手机，揭示主题we ought to use it correctly. Then we can have a better life.