Question

【题目】 假如你是Martin, 你是科比的超级粉丝，自从2016年4月14号科比宣布退役以后，你非常地想念他，请你给科比写一封信，告诉他一些你的情况。

内容包括：1. 10岁时在电视上认识了科比，从此认识了篮球。

2. 了解了篮球的一些知识

3. 对篮球运动的期盼，希望球坛有更多的科比，让篮球运动更精彩。

参考词汇：indoor, outdoor, popular, a team sport, have good skills

提示： （1）文中不允许出现真实姓名，地名，校名。

（2）短文开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数，字数80个词。

Dear Kobe:

How are you? I am a middle school student. I’m your big fan. I miss you these days.________________________

Sincerely

Martin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Kobe:

How are you ? I am a middle school student. I’m your big fan. I miss you these days. I knew you on TV when I was ten years old. I like you so much that I like playing basketball from then on. I know the basketball is an indoor and outdoor sport. It is a team sport.Playing basketball can not only make us strong, but also develop teamwork. I want to be a basketball player like you when I grow up. I hope there are many good plauers like you in the future. I think the basketball will be more wonderful.

Sincerely

Martin

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文是以Martin的名义给科比写一封信，你是科比的超级粉丝，自从2016年4月14号科比宣布退役以后，你非常地想念他。根据题目要求可知该文主要以一般现在时为主，用第一人称书写。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用 I like playing basketball from then on.；I want to be a basketball player like you when I grow up.等重点词句，使得文章非常条理，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。