Question

国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。请你写一篇小短文向大家介绍某条校规、校纪，如能用自己的观点来评价就更好了。（70词左右）

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Answer 1

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One possible version:

There are many rules in our school, At our school we have to wear uniforms every day. The problem is that all my classmates think the uniforms are ugly. I think young people should look smart and so I’d like to wear my own clothes. If we have to wear uniforms , we should be allowed to design our own uniforms. That would be a good way to keep both teachers and students happy.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是材料作文，考生在写作之前必须认真读题，把握写作要求和写作目的。本文要求写一篇小短文向大家介绍某条校规、校纪，用自己的观点来评价更好。字数要求70词左右。校规、校纪应该用情态动词表示应该做的，时态是一般现在时。写作前最好先列出提纲，写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。最后适当的连接词连起来。

【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点，语句通顺，标点符号运用正确。还恰当地运用了些短语和复杂的句式，如have to ,should; if条件状语从句，还有表语从句，可能对初中生来说太难，但是可以作为固定句式记住等等。并注意了句子开头的变化和的衔接如 and so等等。

考点：提纲作文。