Question

假定你叫张强，是北京阳光中学(Beijing Sunshine Secondary Schoo1)的一名初二学生。上星期天你从报上看到观鸟俱乐部(the Birdwatching Club)的招聘广告。请你写封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况(见下表)，表示愿意为俱乐部做一些工作，并请俱乐部负责人考虑并尽早予以答复。

注意：1．信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．词数80左右。
Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday．Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club．
                                                                                
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Best wishes，
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Qiang

Answer 1

Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I’m writing to tell you I’d like to become a member of the Birdwatching Club.
I’m a 15-year-old student in Grade 8 at Beijing Sunshine secondary school. My favourite subjects are P.E. and science. I’m very interested in travelling and playing basketball, and I’m quite healthy. I’m also an animal lover, so I love birds and nature very much. Last year I wrote a report on the endangered animals for our school newspaper.
I think it is very important for me to do something to protect birds.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010-8255668 or e-mail me at zhangqiang@163.com.
Best wishes，

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封应聘信。由于给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。结合材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，第一人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【亮点说明】这篇短文语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，准确地阐明了自己基本爱好和特长，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息，符合应聘信的格式和要求。其中使用了一些固定句式和短语，包含复合形容词的准确使用为文章增色不少.如a 15-year-old student，I’m very interested in travelling and playing basketball，it is very important for me to do something学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。