Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“My trip to Suzhou”为题写篇作文，要点如下：

1.旅游是一项非常好的活动,可以欣赏大自然。

2.上周末我和家人一起乘长途汽车去苏州度假了。旅途花费了一个多小时，我们在那儿呆了2天。

3.苏州是个美丽的城市，有许多名胜。近年来，苏州已发生了许多变化. 过去是。。。。。。现在。。。。。。人们住进新公寓，有电脑和Internet。通过网络，你可以方便快速地搜索到想要去得地方，你甚至可以在网上一个半小时游遍苏州。

4第一天我们在那儿欣赏中国第一大国家园林，情不自禁拍了许多照片；第二天购物，物美价廉，给我的亲戚和朋友买了许多礼物；

5我们玩的很开心。。。。。。

要求：1）条理清楚、语句通顺；

2内容包括相关信息，省略部分要得当并适当发挥；

3）词数：90字左右

4）不得使用真实姓名和班级等。

Answer 1

【答案】

Traveling is a very good activity, you can enjoy the beauty of nature and relax yourself.

Last weekend, I went to Suzhou for a holiday by coach with my family. It took us more than an hour to get there, and we stayed there for 2 days.

Suzhou is a beautiful city with many places of interest. In recent years, a lot of changes have taken place in Suzhou. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, the rubbish was everywhere. Now the streets are wide and clean. There are many shops and tall buildings on both sides of the trees. People live in new apartments with computers and Internet. Through the network, you can quickly and easily find the place you want to go, you can even travel 1.5 hours online in Suzhou.

On the first day, we enjoyed the first big country garden in China, and couldn’t help taking a lot of pictures. The next day we went shopping, the goods there are cheap and good, we bought a lot of gifts for my relatives and friends.

We all had a good time, I will never forget the meaningful experience.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求以“My trip to Suzhou”为题写篇作文，介绍一个注明的旅游城市。材料中给的资料比较全面，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者紧紧围绕提供的几个写作要点，把握写作方向。人称转换及时态把握的都很准确。结构清晰，要点全面。