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向全校师生写一封倡议书A Proposal to Make Our City Clean and Beautiful，谈谈我们的城市存在各种污染，让我们从自己做起，采取哪些行动，来改善我们城市的环境。要求词数100－120之间。文章开头已给出，不记入词数。

　　May 4, 2010

　　My dear schoolmates,

　　We live together in the city of Nanjing, breathing the same air around．It is our duty to make our city cleaner and more beautiful．

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　　Yours sincerely,

　　All students of Class 1, Grade 9

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April 24,2010 　　My dear schoolmates, 　　We live together in the city of Nanjing, breathing the same air around．It is our duty to make our city cleaner and more beautiful． 　　Now our city is facing some serious problems．As more people own cars today, and this becomes a main cause of the air pollution．Waste water in our daily life makes the rivers smell．And we usr too many things made of plastic．It's important for us to take actions to protect our city． 　　As a student, everyone can do many things to help．First, let's walk or ride bikes to school．Second, we should clean the rubbish in time and often keep open the doors and windows of the classroom．We can also put the rubbish into different parts to be used again．Third, we try to use paper bags instead of plastic bags while shopping．Finally, we should plant more trees and flowers around us． 　　My dear schoolmates, join us and do something now！Our city will look nice and beautiful if every one takes actions from now on． 　　Yours sincerely, 　　All students of Class 1, Grade 9 　　书面表达评分标准： 　　第五档：(14－15分)能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。 　　第四档：(11－13分)能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误(句子结构或动词时态错误1－2处)，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。 　　第三档(6－10分)能写明一些要点，语言错误较多(句子结构或动词时态错误3－4处)，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 　　第二档(3－5分)能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。 　　第一档(1－2分)只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。