Question

上周末你带了个外国朋友游览了江阴，并花了约半天时间游览了鹅鼻嘴公园(Ebizui Park)。请根据要点给学校青青草文学社写一篇报道。内容要点如下：
1、鹅鼻嘴公园是江阴最著名的名胜之一，每天吸引大量游客来赏景；
2、几年前，有些游客无视保护环境的重要性，乱扔垃圾，践踏草坪；
3、如今发生了巨大的变化，是许多鸟类的理想家园；
4、为把江阴建成最适合人居的地方，你将……
注意： 1、第4要点的内容须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
2、词数80个左右。
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Last weekend I showed a foreign friend around Jiangyin.We stayed in Ebizui Park for about half a day. Ebizui Park is one of the famous places of interest in Jiangyin.It attracts many visitors to the park to enjoy the beautiful view.Years ago some visitors didn’t know the importance of protecting the environment.They threw rubbish about and stepped on the grass.There have been great changes recently.It has been an ideal home for many birds.In order to make Jiangyin a better place to live,I will work hard…

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般过去时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般过去时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: Ebizui Park is one of the famous places of interest in Jiangyin, Years ago some visitors didn’t know the importance of protecting the environment.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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