Question

书面表达。(共10分)

规划人生，成就未来，请以My Dream为题，描述你的梦想。文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。次数80--100. 参考词汇；be friendly to. help study hard, come true

Answer 1

One possible version:

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friend to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

【解析】

试题分析：有关人生梦想的文章，比较贴近学生的实际，他们也有的说。在写作时，注意多用一般将来时或be going to 结构表示自己的想法。

【亮点说明】这篇短文用比较简单的句式介绍了自己的梦想，但是通过一些这些简单句式的灵活搭配，使得文章避免单纯的重复，使得短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。时态上也把握的非常好。

考点：话题作文。