Question

【题目】假设你是Li Ming， 你给你的笔友Tom寄去了一张你的全家福，然后在信中向他介绍你的全家。信的开头和结尾已给出，字数在60词左右。

DearTom， ____________________________________________________________________________________

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Yourfriend，

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

This is a photo of my family. There are four people in my family. The tall man is my father. He's a doctor. The woman with glasses is my mother. She' s a Chinese teacher in a school. The little girl is my sister. Her name is Li Yan. She's ten years old. She is in Grade Two. My family is a happy one and I love it very much.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Your friend，

Li Ming

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。根据一张全家福照片介绍自己的家人。根据写作内容可知用一般现在时，写作的句式主要是系表结构，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致，同时还应注意写作中要有适当性的发挥。

写作亮点：文章通过照片的形式向我们介绍了自己的家人，层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。短文中出现了两个比较精美的句子The woman with glasses is my mother. My family is a happy one and I love it very much.