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　　假设你是Jim，根据提示写一篇50～70字的短文。

　　1．时间：上星期天；2．地点：农场；3．人物：全班同学；4．事件：帮农民摘苹果；5．议论：累但很开心。

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答案：One possible version: 　　It was fine last Sunday. All my classmates and I went to the farm near our school by bus. The farmers there were very busy. They needed some help with the apple-picking. So we helped them pick apples. Everyone worked very hard. It was really hard work. We worked till late in the evening. We were very tired but we enjoyed it very much. (63　words) 　　解析：根据条件“假设你是Jim”可知，本文应以第一人称展开叙述。 从所给要点来看，本文是一篇记叙文。文章大意是Jim及全班同学上星期天去农场帮农民们摘苹果。但仅这几个要点远不能组成一篇文章。还要展开想像，增加适当的语句，构成完整的篇章。本文可增加对天气的描述；去农场的方式；农民们很忙，需要帮助；劳动吃苦；劳动时间等语句，使文章情节完整，内容充实。