Question

4．根据图示，简要介绍一下如何才能保持健康，并展开想象，适当发挥．要求：词数90个左右．短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
All of us want to be healthy．All of us want to be healthy．First，we should get enough sleep during the night．We can go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late is bad for our health．【高分句型】（足够的睡眠）Second，we must have the right kinds of food．We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat．We should drink a lot of water．We should have healthy eating habits（合理饮食）．Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies．【高分句型】（多运动）Finally，we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day．If we don't feel well，we should go to see the doctor at once．【高分句型】（保持干净，有问题看医生）．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是谈谈如何保持健康．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．足够的睡眠；
2．合理饮食；
3．多运动
4．保持干净，有问题看医生．
常用到的重点短语：
go to bed 上床睡觉
get up 起床
stay up 熬夜
be bad for 对…不利
build up 增进
【高分句型】
1．
①Staying up late②is bad for our health．
①stay up 熬夜，动名词短语做注意谓语动词用单数is．
②be bad for 对…不利
2．Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies．
动词不定式做目的状语，build our bodies 强健我们的身体
3．If we don't feel well，we should go to see the doctor at once．
if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词should，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．

解答 All of us want to be healthy．First，we should get enough sleep during the night．We can go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late is bad for our health．【高分句型】（足够的睡眠）Second，we must have the right kinds of food．We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat．We should drink a lot of water．We should have healthy eating habits（合理饮食）．Third，we should do more exercise to build up our bodies．【高分句型】（多运动）Finally，we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day．If we don't feel well，we should go to see the doctor at once．【高分句型】（保持干净，有问题看医生）

点评 这篇作文要求我们以健康为话题，谈一谈在生活中应该如何保持健康．题目中给了我们一个图示，通过这个图示我们可以看到，想要保持健康，我们应做好三个方面，一是要多运动，然后是要有足够的睡眠，最后是注意饮食习惯．我们也可以发挥自己的想象，补充一些内容．通过分析可知，这篇作文我们应使用一般现在时态，第一人称We来叙述．写作时，除了注意短文的内容之外，还需要注意表达要符合英语的表达习惯，多使用一些自己平时积累的好的短语和句型，使短文更加流畅、连贯．