Question

根据下面的要点提示，写一篇70词左右的英语短文，可适当发挥。要点如下：

 Sandy 是一个美国女孩。她擅长体育，他喜欢游泳，但排球是她最喜欢的运动。她是学校排球队的优秀队员，在空闲时间她总是与她的同学一起在操场上打排球。她父母都是学校的体育老师，她们一家人经常谈论有关体育方面的事情。他们都喜欢运动。

参考词汇：fine 优秀的    American 美国的

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Sandy is an American girl. She is good at sports. She also likes swimming, but volleyball is her favorite sport. She is fine member of the volleyball team of their school. And she always plays volleyball with her classmates on the playground in her spare time. Every time they enjoy themselves. Both of her parents are PE teachers in the school. Their family often talks about the things about sports. They all enjoy sports.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文要求按照所给的内容提示完成这篇作文，我们要用简单准确的英语句子把内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含Sandy的主要爱好、对排球的热爱和主要的活动，进一步介绍她的父母的基本信息等，可针对提示进行适当发挥，但不可偏多。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地介绍了Sandy的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部提示信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如: She is good at sports.她擅长体育和And she always plays volleyball with her classmates on the playground in her spare time. 在空闲时间她总是与她的同学一起在操场上打排球，以及连词和代词的准确运用等，如, Both of her parents are PE teachers in the school.,使文章的表达很有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。