Question

【题目】书面表达。

为了创建文明城市，共建美好泰州，泰州市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。

倡导低碳	骑自行车或步行上学，注意节约……
保护环境	爱护花草，不乱扔垃圾……
礼貌待人	常说“谢谢”、“ 对不起”、“ 请”等礼貌语言……
帮助他人	助人为乐，积极参加志愿者活动……

要求： 1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

First, we should choose to live a low-carbon life. ______________________________.

Second,________________________________________________________________.

Third,_________________________________________________________________.

Finally,________________________________________________________________.

We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!

Answer 1

【答案】In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.

Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.

Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.

Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.

We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!

【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写出中学生应从表格中的几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中had better，by bike, on foot，instead of, pay attention to, as often as possible ，take care of, devote … to …, learn from 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中使用了固定句型It’s +形容词+for sb. +to do sth., 以及定语从句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。