Question

1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Daniel 计划今年暑假来江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况，以便选择度假地点，请根据下面提供的关键词，给他写一封邮件，先介绍城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点．然后说说你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由．
城市生活：supermarket，restaurant，apartment，car，bus，cinema，club，park
农村生活：vegetable，rice，house，motorbike，bicycle，visit，neighbors
共同点：getting better，keeping fit
提示：邮件内容要用上所有关键词，可以从吃住行娱乐四个方面来写，词数不少于 80，开头结尾已经写好了．
Dear Daniel，
    I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday． There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life．Both in the city and in the country，people's life is getting better and better，They pay more and more attention to'keeping fit．However，there are some differences．In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need．They eat at home or in restaurants．They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus．After work，they go to cinemas，clubs or parks to relax themselves．In the country，people grow vegetables and rice by themselves．They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around．In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home．As for me，I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself．I often go to libraries，bookstores and science museums，where I can learn much about the world．
I am looking forward to meeting you!

Best wishes!
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文，要求是假如你是李华，你的美国笔友 Daniel 计划今年暑假来江西度假，他向你了解江西城市生活和农村生活的情况，以便选择度假地点，根据提供的关键词，给他写一封邮件，写作内容主要应该体现：1．城市生活和农村生活的相同点和不同点 2．你自己更喜欢哪种生活，并说明理由，由于是介绍自己家乡，故写作时要用第一人称，介绍家乡情况或人们的状况时，可用第三人称，时态用一般现在时，写作时要尽量用到In the country和in the city 来分别阐述，同时在说明自己更喜欢的生活时，可用到prefer等词．

解答 Dear Daniel，
   I'm very happy that you are coming to Jiangxi to spend your summer holiday．There are some similarities and differences between city life and country life．Both in the city and in the country，people's life is getting better and better，They pay more and more attention to keeping fit．However，there are some differences．In the city people go to supermarkets to buy what they need．They eat at home or in restaurants．They live in apartments and travel around by car or bus．After work，they go to cinemas，clubs or parks to relax themselves．In the country，people grow vegetables and rice by themselves．They live in houses and ride motorbikes or bicycles to go around．In their spare time they would like to visit their neighbors or watch TV at home．As for me，I prefer to live in the city because there are more places to enjoy myself．I often go to libraries，bookstores and science museums，where I can learn much about the world．
   I am looking forward to meeting you!
Best wishes!
Li Hua

点评 本文是提纲作文，主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．在本文中自己的观点部分要注意把理由表达清楚，由于是两者的比较，可以用到prefer等词．