Question

【题目】根据提示写一篇作文。标题是 Life in the future

提示：1.人口迅速增长。

2.工作时间缩短，娱乐和旅游时间将更充裕。

3.机器人做工，很多人面临失业。

要求：1. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

2．字迹工整。

3．80个词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Life in the future

I have long been looking forward to life in the future. As far as I’m concerned, there must be lots of changes in the future. Firstly, I believe the population will increase rapidly. Besides, with working hours being shorter than ever before, people will have more time to relax. They will spend more time having fun and travelling. Most importantly, I think a lot of people will lose their jobs because there will be robots doing work such as cleaning and even dangerous work. But no matter what will happen, our life must be full of fun and comfort.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达要求对“Life in the future”这一话题展开预测未来生活，并适当发挥。首先，要认真审题，掌握来信中的信息，需要回答的问题。然后整体把握写作的大致方向，谋篇布局。结合三个要点信息：1.人口迅速增长。2.工作时间缩短，娱乐和旅游时间将更充裕。3.机器人做工，很多人面临失业。写作中注意上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。文章使用三个连词使文章层次清晰，表述分明，使用了很多句型和短语： “As far as I’m concerned, Firstly, Besides, Most importantly,”“ I have long been looking forward to life in the future.”以及复合句“Most importantly, I think a lot of people will lose their jobs because there will be robots doing work such as cleaning and even dangerous work. But no matter what will happen, our life must be full of fun and comfort.”的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。