Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你叫ZhangWei,今年暑假你要到澳大利亚悉尼游学，你的寄宿家庭 Mr Green 一家想了解你的家庭情况、你的外形外貌、兴趣爱好、特长以及你到澳大利亚后的愿望和活动等。请你根据实际情况写一封信给他们，信的字数为60~80词左右。

注意：1.不能透露具体校名及真实姓名，否则不予评分。

2. 信的开头、结尾已经给出，不计入词数。

Dear Mr Green,

Let me tell you something about my family and me._______________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________.

Zhang Wei

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Mr Green,

Let me tell you something about my family and me. My name is Zhang Wei. There are three people in my family, my parents and me. I love my parents, especially my father. He is a doctor. He enjoys his job and is friendly to his sick people. He always supports me when I’m in trouble.

Of all my hobbies, I like playing football best. I want to be the best footballer in the future. To make my dream come true, I practice playing it after school.

I hope I can learn more about some foreign cultures and study English better. I think staying in your family will bring me lots of unforgettable experience.

Yours

Zhang Wei

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，向澳大利亚悉尼游学的寄宿家庭Mr Green一家介绍自己的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Myname is……，There are......， I love ......， I want to ......，I hope......，I think ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字和家人，接下来介绍我的爱好，最后指出我喜欢可以在他家有难忘的经历。此处be friendly to, be in trouble, like doing sth, want to do sth, in the future, come true, learn about, lots of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。