Question

19．每年的8月8日是"全民健身日"． 为了让这项运动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的栏目正在以"Let's Do Exercise Together"为题，向广大中学生征文．请你根据下面表格中的要点提示写一篇文章，向该栏目投稿．

运动的重要性	运动的时间与方式
?保持健康； ?培养个人的性格	?上学时步行或骑自行车； ?体育课做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球…） ?周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等．

参考词汇：keep fit，train a person's character，on foot，PE class，climb mountains
要求：（1）词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
（2）短文中不得出现真空的人名、校名和地点．
Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以"Let's Do Exercise Together"为题说说运动的重要性和方式．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．运动的重要性：保持健康、培养个人的性格；
2．运动的时间和方式：上学时步行或骑自行车、上体育课做各种锻炼、周末与朋友爬山游泳等
常用到的重点短语：
not only…but also…不仅…而且…
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
keep fit 保持健康
what's more 再者
be good for 对…有益
【高分句型】
1．Doing exercise can ①not only②help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．
①not only…but also…不仅…而且…
②help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事，keep fit 保持健康
2．①What's more，②doing exercise helps us to study better．
①what's more 再者
②动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数helps．
3．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Let's Do Exercise Together
It's very important for us to do exercise．Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit，but also help to train a person's character．【高分句型】What's more，doing exercise helps us to study better．（运动的重要性）【高分句型】
We can do exercise whenever we want．It is good for us to go to school on foot or by bike【高分句型】．In PE classes，we can do all kinds of exercise，such as running，jumping，playing basketball and so on．On weekends，we can climb mountains or go swimming with our friends．Also，we can go hiking during the vacations．（运动的时间和方式）
Let's do exercise and have a healthy lifestyle together!

点评 这是一篇给出情景的图表作文．图表内容较为简单，要全部包括在作文中．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写，注意作文的条理．根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯．考生在时间允许的情况下，可先列出大致提纲，再根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．