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8．"广场舞"square dancing作为一种集体娱乐健身的活动方式越来越受到中国大妈的追捧，但其所产生的噪音，或因抢占地盘所引发的矛盾也越来越多，请谈一谈你对"广场舞"的看法并提出适当建议．

advantage	keep fit
	make new friends
	…
disadvantage	make much noise
	fight for a dancing place
	…
My opinion

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Square Dancing
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China．Not only is it a good way of keeping fit，but also it's a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends．No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident．However，when people in large number dance to loud music，they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear．What's worse，some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding．
In my opinion，we shouldn't dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others'life．Let's dance politely and happily．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
①Not only is it a good way of②keeping fit，but also ③it's a good time for the elder to walk outdoor ④to make and meet friends．这不仅是一种保持身体健康的好方法，也是老年人在户外散步、结交朋友的好时机．
①not only…but also…不但…而且，前一个分句采用倒装语序．
②keep fit保持健康
③It+be（名词）+for sb+to do sth"对某人来说做某事是…的"；it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语
④动词不定式作目的状语
高分句型二：
①No wonder ②that most dancers say③that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident．难怪大多数的舞者说，跳舞使他们看起来更年轻，更自信．
①no wonder 难怪
②that引导主语从句
③that引导宾语从句作say的宾语

解答 Square Dancing
Square dancing is becoming more and more popular with the elder people in China．Not only is it a good way of keeping fit，but also it's a good time for the elder to walk outdoor to make and meet friends．【高分句型一】No wonder that most dancers say that dancing makes them look younger and feel more confident．【高分句型二】【广场舞的好处】However，when people in large number dance to loud music，they create the noise that neighborhoods find it painful to bear．What's worse，some dancers even fight for a certain place to dance and lead to blooding．【广场舞的坏处】
In my opinion，we shouldn't dance too late or dance to too loud music to disturb others'life．Let's dance politely and happily．【我的看法】
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