Question

8．暑假到来，第一中学的学生计划趁毕业后的这一段时间外出旅游，好好休息一下．请用英语写一篇80-100词左右的调查报告，说明有关旅游去向的调查结果，并根据中文提示写出几种选择各自的相关理由．
相关提示：
1）大城市可参观博物馆和旅游胜地
2）看望爷爷奶奶并享受美食
3）农村可呼吸新鲜空气并欣赏美丽的大自然
The summer holidays are coming．The students from No.1 Middle School will finish school soon．They are looking forward to a trip to relax themselves．They have done a survey about where they would like to go．
Here is the result．Half of the students hope to go to big cities so that they can visit museums and places of interest．One sixth of them are going to visit their grandparents and eat their favourite foods．The rest of them want to go to the countryside，where they can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the nature．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是说明有关旅游去向的调查结果以及各自的理由．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1）大城市：1/2  可参观博物馆和旅游胜地
2）看望爷爷奶奶  1/6  并享受美食
3）农村：1/3 可呼吸新鲜空气并欣赏美丽的大自然
常用到的重点短语：
look forward to 盼望…
half of…一半
place of interest 名胜
the rest of…剩下的
【高分句型】
1．They are①looking forward to a trip②to relax．
①look forward to 盼望…．to是介词后加名词代词或动名词
②动词不定式做目的状语
2．Half of the students hope to go to big cities①so that they can visit museums and ②places of interest．
①so that引导的目的状语从句．
②place of interest 名胜
3．The rest of them want to go to the countryside，where they can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the nature．
where作为引导词的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词countryside．

解答 The summer holidays are coming．The students from No.1 Middle School will finish school soon．They are looking forward to a trip to relax themselves．【高分句型】They have done a survey about where they would like to go．
Here is the result．Half of the students hope to go to big cities so that they can visit museums and places of interest．【高分句型】（大城市：1/2  可参观博物馆和旅游胜地）One sixth of them are going to visit their grandparents and eat their favourite foods．（看望爷爷奶奶  1/6  并享受美食）The rest of them want to go to the countryside，where they can breathe the fresh air and enjoy the beauty of the nature．【高分句型】（农村：1/3 可呼吸新鲜空气并欣赏美丽的大自然）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全．动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．写作中注意分数的表达法，注意时态和主谓一致等问题．写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．