Question

11．你班以"告别陋习，走向文明"为主题进行了一次综合实践活动．同学们收获很大，尤其是郑爽同学．请你根据下表内容写一篇英语短文叙述郑爽在活动前后的表现．请你对今后的班级活动提出一些建议．词数在100词左右．文章开头已给出，不记总词数．

in the past	at the moment
come to school late	come to school early
quarrel with others	be friendly to others
make noise	listen to the teacher carefully
throw rubbish about	collect the rubbish

I am glad that Zheng Shuang has made great progress．In the past，he often came to school late．He often quarrelled with his classmates．He made much noise in class and he also threw rubbish everywhere．Sometimes he played computer games too much and his parents and teachers all worried about him．They often talked with him patiently．
But he has changed a lot recently．At the moment，he comes to school on time．He is friendly with his classmates and gets on well with them．He listens to the teachers carefully in class．He often helps collect rubbish with other students．He can finish his homework carefully on time．All the teachers and his classmates think highly of him．
I hope our class will organize more activities．Our classmates will take an active part in them．We will certainly be more helpful，more friendly，more skillful and have many other good qualities．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是叙述郑爽在"告别陋习，走向文明"活动前后的表现．请你对今后的班级活动提出一些建议．时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．过去；上学迟到，和别人吵架，制造噪音，乱扔垃圾
2．现在；早点上学，对他人友好，仔细听课，收集垃圾
3．我的建议
常用到的重点短语：
make progress 取得进步
quarrel with sb 与某人吵架
make noise 制造噪音
get on with sb 与某人相处
take part in 参加

【高分句型】
1．I am glad that Zheng Shuang has made great progress．
I am glad 我很开心，that宾语从句正好对此作出陈述或说明．
2．Sometimes he played computer games too much①and his parents and teachers②all worried about him．
①and连接的两个并列句．
②worry about  担心
3．I hope our class will organize more activities．
hope后省略了引导词that的宾语从句．

解答 I am glad that Zheng Shuang has made great progress【高分句型】In the past，he often came to school late．He often quarrelled with his classmates．He made much noise in class and he also threw rubbish everywhere．Sometimes he played computer games too much and his parents and teachers all worried about him．【高分句型】They often talked with him patiently．（郑爽的过去）
   But he has changed a lot recently．At the moment，he comes to school on time．He is friendly with his classmates and gets on well with them．He listens to the teachers carefully in class．He often helps collect rubbish with other students．He can finish his homework carefully on time．All the teachers and his classmates think highly of him．（郑爽的现在）
   I hope our class will organize more activities．【高分句型】Our classmates will take an active part in them．We will certainly be more helpful，more friendly，more skillful and have many other good qualities．（我的建议）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．以表格的形式给出了作文的主要内容，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点．根据材料内容确定主要句子的时态，及句式等重要内容．由于材料涉及过去和现在的内容，故注意过去时态和一般现在时态的应用．
该题型主要考查学生的语言表达能力，在写作中根据所给提示和语言信息，不遗漏要点，可以适当发挥．做到表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯