Question

【题目】书面表达 (本大题共10分)

假设你是第一中学的一名学生，3月21日是学校开放日,邀请家长来校听课参观,你作为志愿者参与了开放日活动。请你以“The School Open Day”为题，在答题卡指定的位置上写一篇90词左右的英文报道。内容提示如下：

1. 你带领家长参观美丽的校园，并一同观看了升国旗仪式。

2. 家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能。

3. 王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。

4. 张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生呈现到课堂上，讲述了七十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗。

5. 家长们都感到……并希望…

( 参考词汇：抗日战争the Anti-Japanese War)

注意：

1．文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2．最后要点的内容须用2到3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

3．报道的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。

The School Open Day

No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on March 21st. Many parents were invited to our school. I

Answer 1

【答案】

The School Open Day

No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on March 21st. Many parents were invited to our school. I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of national flag together. Parents listened to many lessons. They thought highly of teachers’ excellent teaching skills. The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting. She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together. The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the Anti-Japanese War alive in class. He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 70 years ago. Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers’ hard work and personal charm. They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇文章主要是介绍学校的开放日，带领家长参观参观校园及观后的感受。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文结构完整，要点齐全，表达准确流畅。文章使用了很多实用的表达方式，例如：They thought highly of teachers’ excellent teaching skills ;he music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting等,给文章增色不少。