Question

书面表达。
上周学校举行了初三年级家长会，家长、学生和老师进行了面对面的交流，尤芳芳代表同学们说出了困惑，表示了决心：
1.因为经常考试，她时常有些压力，有时感到心烦意乱；
2.作业多，没有时间…；不知如何平衡学习与玩耍.
3.老师告诉她放松的方法有很多：⑴多与父母或朋友交流，⑵……
4.现在她知道了时间的重要性，能按时交作业，已经取得很大的进步；
要求：1、短文要包括列举的要点并且适当发挥。
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
3、词数100词以上，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last week our school held a parents’ meeting. Parents, students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. She __________________________               
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              

Answer 1

Last week our school held a parents’ meeting.Parents,students and teachers sat together and talked a lot.You Fangfang says she has a lot of problems. she often suffers from stress and feels disturbed at times/ from time to time because of exams.she has a lot of /too much homework,so she doesn’t have time for her hobbies.She often doesn’t know how to keep a balance between work and play. Her teacher tells her there are many ways to relax: ⑴she can often communicate with/talk to her parents and friends, ⑵……Now she has known the importance of saving time/it’s important to save time, she hand in her homework on time and has made great progress in study.

试题分析：文章首先对题目进行审清，不要遗漏了某一点。本文首先从尤芳芳所遇到的问题着手来写文章，可以用上suffer from遭受，have difficult in doing sth等句型短语来表达她所遇到的困难；然后介绍老师给她提供的方法，可以说多与父母交流，多做户外运动等，在表达过程中要注意使用连词来使文章富有条理；最后表达她知道了时间的重要性，能够合理的利用时间，取得了很大的进步。
点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于要做的几件事情，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。