Question

【题目】（福建省漳州市2015年中考）短文写作

学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享?可采取哪些方式分享?请根据图示内容，结合自身的一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐述分享的意义。

要求：

1．要点齐全，并适当发挥；

2．词数：80词左右(开头已给出、不计入总词数)；

3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学佼名称。

Sharing

It’s very important to learn to share with each other．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Sharing

It’s very important to learn to share with each other. I have many things to share in different ways．For example，I can share some beautiful pictures，favorite music，different ideas with others face to face or by QQ and e-mail which are widely used. Now I’d like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you．

Emily was lonely and unhappy．I hoped to cheer her up．So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her after class．As time went by，she became used to sharing her feelings with me．Now we’re good friends．

In a word，sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up．We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more．

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图画作文。图画内容要点突出，条理清楚，我们要做的就是用英语把这些要点内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘图画内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文涵盖了图画包含的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语如share …with，face to face，cheer sb up，go by，be used to，not only… but also…，grow up，learn … from…等，这为文章增色不少。