Question

春节就要到了，通常你在春节前会和妈妈一起出去购物。请根据下表提供的信息，完成一篇英语短文。请注意要语句连贯，条理清楚，适当发挥。字数60-70字左右，开头已经给出，不计入词数。      

	what  to   buy	where   to    buy
going shopping	some orange juice…	a food shop
	some vegetables and fruit, no sweet snacks	…
	a pretty pink coat	…
	something else…	…
reasons(原因)	buy some… because we like\hate them. be good \ bad for health…
	look for a pink coat this year because it matches…

My mother and I usually go shopping together for Chinese New Year.
We buy something to drink and eat in a food shop. _____________________________
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Answer 1

My mother and I usually go shopping together for Chinese New Year.
We buy something to drink and eat in a food shop. We would like to buy some orange juice because they are good for our health. And we also buy some vegetables and fruit, because all my family members like eating them. But we don’t buy any sweet snacks because we don’t like them.
We often buy some new clothes in a clothes shop. I am looking for a pink coat this year, because the colour matches my new trousers well.
I always buy some books in a bookshop, too，because I like reading books. They are interesting.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。结合所给材料，介绍春节的事情。根据内容可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题和一些常见句式的应用，比如：We would like to buy……，I always buy some books in a bookshop, too，because I like reading books.等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文简明、扼要地阐明了“我”和家人在春节期间活动的基本信息，并且并包含了图表中所列举的全部信息，并且用了一些连词如：and及because等。提醒学生注意积累短语及句式并要会使用准确，做到条理清晰，有条不紊，这是一篇不错的英语范文。