Question

根据下面的提示用英语写一篇日记，记录4月14日（星期天）你和你的朋友李明
一起参观南通博物馆的经过。

内容要点
距离	博物馆离家约五公里
交通工具	骑自行车
时间	八点出发，十二点回家
内容	看到了许多照片、实物等，看见了许多孩子和他们的家长
收获与感受	……（请考生自拟至少两点内容）

 
要求：1. 词数：90左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Sunday, Apr. 14                                                    Fine
Today is a fine day. My friend Li Ming and I decided to visit the Nantong Museum.
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Answer 1

Sunday, Apr. 14                                                    Fine
Today is a fine day. My friend Li Ming and I decided to visit the Nantong Museum.
It is about 5 kilometres away from my home. So we went there by bike. We set off at 8 o’clock. It took us half an hour to get there. At the museum we saw many photos and other interesting things. Some of them are very old. There we saw a lot of children with their parents. They were also very interested in those things. At twelve we left the museum for home.
Today we (have) learned a lot about the history of Nantong. Although we were very tired, we felt very happy. What a wonderful day!

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇记述文，介绍参观南通博物馆的经过。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要是一般过去时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。人称主要为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。本文主要按照时间关系进行叙述，写作适当使用连词，做到语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。