Question

文段表达（10分）根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑，不少于50词的短文。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。

每个人的一生都有很多第一次，比如第一次外出旅游，第一次说英语，第一次学画画…… English Online杂志开办了以“My first time to ….”为主题的专栏讨论，请你写一篇短文参加交流，请你根据下面的问题完成短文。

提示词语：first, experience, share, succeed, proud, because…

What was your first experience? What happened to you during your experience? How did you feel and why did you have that feeling?

My first time to

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Everyone has many first-time experiences and so do I. Now I’d like to share with you my first time to cook.

One Sunday my parents went out. I felt hungry at noon, so I decided to cook for myself. I tried to cook some vegetables, but the pot caught fire when I put some oil into it. Luckily, my mother came back and helped me put down the fire.

Although I did not succeed in my first cooking, I still felt proud of myself because it’s a start of trying something new–now I’ve been quite a good cook.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以Where is your time going?为题写一篇作文，即你的时间都去哪了。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括三部分的内容。一是过去都把时间花费在哪些地方了，如沉迷于电视剧、做没玩没了的作业，另外还需自己再补充一条；二是现在把时间都花费在哪儿了，如阅读、锻炼和旅行。同样自己再列举一个例子；最后是想象未来会把时间花费在什么地方，如家庭、工作、慈善事业等。提纲虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从过去、现在和将来三个方面，分成三段，讲述了自己的时间都花费在哪了，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如Sometimes I would play computer games. It was a good way to kill time；I also learn to do something new, for example, cooing. Because I want enjoy the satisfaction of eating my own meals等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如In the past, I was addicted in watching TV series and spent a lot of time on it、When I am free, I go traveling to see the natural beauties of the world、I can do my part to make the world a better place to live in等。

考点：提纲类作文。