Question

1．中国教师网开设了"My teacher"论坛，请你结合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以"A good teacher in my eyes"为题写一篇短文，发表在该论坛上．
要求：1．体裁不限，议论文、记叙文都可以；
2．条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息．
                                                                             

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I ①was very lucky to have met many good teachers，among②whom the most impressive one is my English teacher．我很幸运的遇见很多好老师，其中最让我印象深刻的是我的英语老师．
①be lucky to do sth 做某事很幸运．
②whom引导的非限制定语从句．修饰前面的teachers．
【高分句型二】
Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever．南希温暖的性格创造了一种永恒的友谊．
that引导的定语从句，修饰前面的friendship．

解答 A good teacher in my eyes
I was very lucky to have met many good teachers，among whom the most impressive one is my English teacher．【高分句型一】She is a woman of medium height．She is in her thirties．Her name is Nancy．（我眼中的老师是谁）
I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons．To start with，she spent a lot of her spare time talking with us，helping us with problems in study and personal life．Second，the wonderfully creative lessons she delivered make English learning no longer a hard job but full of fun．I enjoy every minute of her lesson．And third，Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever．【高分句型二】Her great sense of humor and encouraging words made us close to each other like friends（原因和我的感受）

点评 这是一篇命题作文，以"我眼中的好老师"为题写一篇作文．写作时，要注意文章结构的完整性，在写人记事时都要表达清晰，逻辑思维严谨．尤其要主语主谓一致，在使用不同的时态时动词要发生变化．句子之间注意衔接．