Question

以“My Dream Home”为题来谈谈自己的梦想家园，80个单词左右。
我的梦想家园在山脚下。有两层，房前有一个大花园，种满了花。
一楼有一个厨房和家庭影院，因为我喜欢…
我的父母住在二楼，我有自己的卧室，我可以…
我最喜欢的地方是……因为……
我爱我的梦想家园。
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Answer 1

My dream home is at the foot ot the mountain.There are two floors .And there is a big garden in front of the house. I like the garden because of having a lot of flowers.
There is a kitchen on the first floor. I like watching moives very much. My parents live on the second floor. I have my own bedroom. I can do what I want to do in my bedroom. I like my studyroom best because reading is my hobby. I can learn a lot when I am reading.
I love my dream home。

试题分析：这是一篇列出提纲的给材料作文。要求介绍介绍我的梦想家园。主要用到第一人称，一般现在时态。
【亮点说明】这篇短文要点全，几乎没有语言错误。能够利用连词，because,and 等。短文用了一些短语和句式，如：My dream home is at the foot ot the mountain；I like watching moives very much. I can do what I want to do in my bedroom.等。